Rhymes with Metaphor
by Alden B. Atmore
Twenty-four-year-old Welsh Canadian poet Reg is struggling to finish his MFA while in the grips of writer’s block. His best friend, Martin, attempting to get him out of his head and needing a wingman, convinces him to come to his crush’s party. What Reg doesn’t anticipate is meeting the crush’s eighteen-year-old brother, Joel, a first-year premed student whose perfect self-possession gets right up Reg’s nose.
But, like sand in an oyster, Joel’s irritating presence has a productive effect on Reg, and suddenly, he’s writing poetry again (still irritated, but writing). Joel’s self-assurance, however, is an act; the pressure of school and family expectation have rendered him so tightly wound he’s about to snap, and when Joel finally comes apart, there’s no one to help put him back together. Except Reg.
If Reg were any further up himself, he’d disappear, but he finds that he can’t stand by and watch his muse suffer. And he discovers that this more vulnerable Joel opens his heart.
But this new relationship threatens Reg’s friendship with Martin, as Martin’s crush (now girlfriend) believes Reg is taking advantage of her baby brother.
Reg must choose: Give up Joel or lose Martin, his best and only friend.
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'Rhymes with Metaphor' by Alden B. Atmore is a compelling exploration of the intersection between creativity, personal growth, and the complexities of human relationships. Atmore crafts a narrative that is both introspective and engaging, drawing readers into the tumultuous world of Reg, a young poet grappling with the dual challenges of writer's block and the pressures of academia.
The novel's protagonist, Reg, is a character who embodies the quintessential struggle of many young artists: the battle between inspiration and self-doubt. Atmore skillfully portrays Reg's internal conflict, making him a relatable figure for anyone who has faced creative stagnation. Reg's journey is not just about overcoming writer's block; it is a deeper exploration of identity and the fear of inadequacy. His character development is nuanced, as he evolves from a self-absorbed, somewhat cynical young man into someone capable of empathy and genuine connection.
Central to Reg's transformation is his relationship with Joel, the younger brother of Martin's crush. Joel is introduced as a seemingly confident premed student, but Atmore peels back the layers to reveal a young man under immense pressure. Joel's facade of self-assurance is a defense mechanism against the expectations placed upon him by his family and society. This portrayal of Joel is particularly poignant, as it highlights the often unseen struggles of those who appear to have it all together. Atmore's depiction of Joel's unraveling is both sensitive and realistic, capturing the vulnerability that lies beneath his polished exterior.
The dynamic between Reg and Joel is the heart of the novel. Their relationship begins with irritation and evolves into a profound connection that challenges both characters to confront their vulnerabilities. Atmore uses their interactions to explore themes of inspiration and the muse, suggesting that creativity can be sparked by the most unexpected sources. Joel becomes a catalyst for Reg's renewed poetic output, illustrating how personal relationships can fuel artistic expression. This theme is reminiscent of other literary works where unlikely muses drive the creative process, such as in Stephen Chbosky's 'The Perks of Being a Wallflower' where friendship and personal growth are intertwined with artistic awakening.
However, the burgeoning relationship between Reg and Joel is not without its complications. Atmore introduces a tension that is both external and internal. Externally, Reg's friendship with Martin is threatened, as Martin's girlfriend perceives Reg's involvement with Joel as exploitative. This conflict adds a layer of complexity to the narrative, forcing Reg to make difficult choices about loyalty and love. Internally, Reg must confront his own motivations and the fear of losing his only friend. Atmore deftly navigates these conflicts, creating a narrative that is as much about personal integrity as it is about romantic and platonic relationships.
Atmore's writing style is both lyrical and accessible, capturing the essence of poetic expression while maintaining a narrative that is grounded and relatable. The dialogue is sharp and often witty, providing moments of levity amidst the more serious themes. Atmore's ability to balance humor with introspection is reminiscent of the works of David Nicholls, particularly in 'One Day', where character-driven storytelling is interwoven with humor and emotional depth.
One of the novel's strengths is its exploration of the theme of expectation versus reality. Both Reg and Joel are characters caught between what is expected of them and what they truly desire. Atmore uses their stories to comment on the pressures faced by young adults in contemporary society, particularly in the context of academic and familial expectations. This theme resonates with readers who have experienced similar pressures, making the novel both timely and timeless in its appeal.
In conclusion, 'Rhymes with Metaphor' is a beautifully crafted novel that delves into the intricacies of creativity, friendship, and love. Alden B. Atmore has created a story that is both thought-provoking and emotionally resonant, with characters that linger in the mind long after the final page is turned. The novel's exploration of the transformative power of relationships and the courage required to pursue one's true path makes it a compelling read for anyone who has ever struggled to find their voice. Atmore's work stands alongside other contemporary explorations of young adulthood, offering a unique perspective on the challenges and triumphs of finding one's place in the world.
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