Inconveniently Bayou
by Erin Nicholas
Becca has been the annoying girl next door since they were ten.
She’d gotten pretty at about aged fifteen. She’d gotten beautiful around sixteen-and-a-half—not that he’d been keeping track. Thank God, she hadn’t gotten gorgeous until she was eighteen.
But she’s always been annoying.
Especially when she’s calling him out on his B.S.
And punching him in the nose.
Yeah, annoyance… that’s what he’s feeling when she comes down in one costume after another, showing off curves and all that skin, determined to attract some other guy’s attention at the Halloween party.
But he’s not so sure that’s what he’s feeling when he finally gives in and kisses this girl he’s always thought of as a neighbor, maybe a friend, and his sometimes-conscience. And who he’s now thinking of as mine.
This is the happy-for-now prequel to the full-length novel Always Bayou.
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Martial Peak Reviews
Erin Nicholas's Inconveniently Bayou is a charming and engaging novella that serves as a prequel to her full-length novel, Always Bayou. This story is a delightful exploration of the classic "girl-next-door" trope, infused with humor, warmth, and a touch of nostalgia. Nicholas crafts a narrative that is both familiar and refreshing, drawing readers into the lives of Becca and her neighbor, whose relationship evolves from childhood annoyance to something much more profound.
At its core, Inconveniently Bayou is a story about growth and the complexities of human relationships. The novella captures the essence of growing up alongside someone who knows you better than you know yourself. Becca, the protagonist, is a vibrant character who embodies the spirit of youthful exuberance and determination. Her evolution from the "annoying girl next door" to a confident young woman is portrayed with authenticity and depth. Nicholas does an excellent job of illustrating Becca's transformation, making her a relatable and endearing character.
The male protagonist, whose perspective we primarily follow, is equally well-developed. His initial perception of Becca as merely an annoyance gradually shifts as he begins to see her in a new light. This transition is handled with subtlety and care, allowing readers to witness the internal conflict and eventual realization of his feelings. The dynamic between the two characters is electric, filled with witty banter and genuine moments of connection. Nicholas's ability to capture the nuances of their relationship is one of the novella's greatest strengths.
One of the standout themes in Inconveniently Bayou is the idea of seeing beyond first impressions and recognizing the true value of a person. The protagonist's journey from dismissing Becca's presence to acknowledging her importance in his life is a testament to the power of perspective and personal growth. This theme is universal and resonates with readers who have experienced similar realizations in their own lives.
The novella is also imbued with a sense of humor that adds levity to the narrative. Becca's antics, particularly her determination to attract another man's attention at a Halloween party, provide comedic relief while also serving as a catalyst for the protagonist's change of heart. Nicholas's use of humor is skillful, enhancing the story without overshadowing its emotional depth.
In terms of writing style, Nicholas employs a conversational tone that makes the story accessible and engaging. Her prose is crisp and vivid, painting a clear picture of the characters and their surroundings. The dialogue is sharp and realistic, capturing the essence of the characters' personalities and their evolving relationship. Nicholas's ability to balance humor, emotion, and narrative progression is commendable, making Inconveniently Bayou a compelling read from start to finish.
Comparatively, Inconveniently Bayou shares thematic similarities with other works in the romance genre, such as The Hating Game by Sally Thorne and Wallbanger by Alice Clayton. Like these novels, Nicholas's novella explores the fine line between love and annoyance, capturing the tension and chemistry that often accompany such relationships. However, Nicholas's unique voice and the Southern charm of the Bayou setting give the story its own distinct flavor, setting it apart from its contemporaries.
Overall, Inconveniently Bayou is a delightful and heartwarming read that will appeal to fans of romance and coming-of-age stories. Erin Nicholas has crafted a novella that is both entertaining and thought-provoking, offering readers a glimpse into the complexities of love and friendship. The story's blend of humor, emotion, and relatable themes makes it a standout addition to the genre, and a perfect introduction to the world of Always Bayou.
For those seeking a story that captures the magic of unexpected love and the journey of self-discovery, Inconveniently Bayou is a must-read. Nicholas's ability to weave a tale that is both lighthearted and meaningful is a testament to her skill as a storyteller, and this novella is sure to leave readers eagerly anticipating the full-length novel that follows.
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