Everything's Better With You
by R.L. Merrill
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Everything’s Better With You is a TED LASSO-inspired sports-themed funny romance featuring two guys who’ve pined for each other for 15 years while their careers soared and their bodies fell apart.
Retired quarterback and “nicest guy in the NFL” Leslie Payton met former college cheerleader-turned-reality-show darling Joe Judd fifteen years ago. They spent one magical night…talking. They’ve been pining for each other via text and phone calls ever since while their careers kept them geographically apart. When their alma mater recruits them to reinvigorate a flagging athletic program, Leslie is thrilled to finally have Joe close enough to see if their “what if” can become a reality. And the sooner the better before Leslie’s history of Traumatic Brain Injury catches up to him and he’s unable to be a true partner.
Joe has spent their years apart dancing on reality TV, Broadway, and concert tours, knowing full well the clock is ticking on his body’s ability to continue taking the abuse. Leslie wants forever to start now, and Joe doesn’t have that luxury, though Leslie makes him want things he’s never allowed himself to dream of with anyone else. But a lifetime of only feeling worthwhile for his performance ability makes him doubt whether he could ever be a good coach or enough of a partner for the best man he’s ever known.
As football and cheer coaches, they’re forced to be rivals in public, but behind closed doors, their chemistry is unstoppable. A wager triggers their competitive sides, but the secrets they keep come to light and present them with a seemingly insurmountable obstacle. Can they finally meet on the relationship 50-yard line and move forward as a team?
Recommended for readers 18 and up who love open and honest dialogue about sex, and challenges to toxic masculinity. Also included: mesh crop tops, gratuitous shirtless car wash scenes, phone sex therapy, and all the pining.
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Martial Peak Reviews
R.L. Merrill's Everything's Better With You is a delightful exploration of love, resilience, and the complexities of human relationships, wrapped up in a sports-themed romance that is both heartwarming and deeply engaging. Inspired by the feel-good charm of TED LASSO, this novel offers a refreshing take on the romance genre by focusing on two male protagonists whose lives have been intertwined by fate and longing for over a decade.
The story centers around Leslie Payton, a retired quarterback known as the “nicest guy in the NFL,” and Joe Judd, a former college cheerleader who has since become a reality TV sensation. Their connection began fifteen years ago with a night of deep conversation, setting the stage for years of pining and unfulfilled desires. This long-distance yearning is beautifully captured through their text and phone exchanges, which serve as a testament to their enduring bond despite the physical distance.
One of the novel's most compelling themes is the passage of time and its impact on the body and spirit. Both Leslie and Joe are acutely aware of the ticking clock on their physical abilities—Leslie due to his history of Traumatic Brain Injury and Joe from the wear and tear of a demanding performance career. This shared vulnerability adds a poignant layer to their relationship, as they grapple with the fear of losing not only their careers but also the chance to be together.
Character development is a standout feature in Merrill's narrative. Leslie is portrayed as a man of integrity and warmth, whose kindness is matched only by his determination to make the most of the time he has left. His desire to turn the “what if” into reality with Joe is both urgent and tender, making him a deeply sympathetic character. Joe, on the other hand, is a complex figure who struggles with self-worth and the pressure to perform. His journey towards self-acceptance and the realization that he deserves love and happiness is both moving and relatable.
The chemistry between Leslie and Joe is electric, and Merrill does an excellent job of balancing humor and heat in their interactions. The novel is filled with witty banter and playful rivalry, especially as they take on roles as football and cheer coaches at their alma mater. This setting not only provides a backdrop for their romance but also allows for a broader commentary on the challenges of toxic masculinity and the importance of open dialogue about sex and relationships.
In terms of narrative structure, the use of a wager to trigger their competitive sides is a clever device that propels the story forward. It adds an element of tension and excitement, as both characters are forced to confront their fears and secrets. The revelation of these secrets serves as a pivotal moment in the story, presenting an obstacle that tests the strength of their relationship.
Merrill's writing is both engaging and insightful, with a keen eye for detail and an ear for authentic dialogue. The inclusion of elements such as mesh crop tops, shirtless car wash scenes, and phone sex therapy adds a layer of fun and playfulness to the story, making it a thoroughly enjoyable read. These moments of levity are balanced by the deeper emotional currents that run through the narrative, creating a well-rounded and satisfying romance.
When compared to other romance novels featuring LGBTQ+ protagonists, Everything's Better With You stands out for its mature and nuanced portrayal of love and partnership. It shares thematic similarities with works by authors like Alexis Hall and Casey McQuiston, who also explore the complexities of queer relationships with humor and heart. However, Merrill's focus on the intersection of sports and romance, along with the exploration of aging and physical limitations, gives this novel a unique and refreshing perspective.
Overall, Everything's Better With You is a compelling and heartwarming read that will resonate with fans of romance and sports alike. It is a testament to the power of love to transcend time and distance, and a reminder that true partnership requires vulnerability, honesty, and a willingness to meet each other halfway. Recommended for readers who appreciate open and honest dialogue, challenges to traditional gender norms, and a healthy dose of humor and heart.
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