Catching His Eye
by Emily Antoinette
Ren, the nerdy cyclops, desperately wants a partner, but has been unlucky in love both on monster and human dating apps. He thinks he’s too much for anyone to want.
But when this shy sweetheart accidentally starts a private with his gorgeous human camgirl obsession, he might just find the one who can fit him into their heart—and elsewhere!
Catching His Eye is a fast burn, spicy monster romance novella featuring a shy cyclops MMC, a plus size human FMC who doesn’t know monsters are real, and a mischievous cat who accidentally plays matchmaker.
This novella is set in the Monsters of Moonvale universe, but is a standalone story.
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Martial Peak Reviews
Emily Antoinette's novella, Catching His Eye, offers a delightful and refreshing take on the monster romance genre, blending humor, heart, and a touch of the fantastical. Set in the intriguing Monsters of Moonvale universe, this standalone story captivates readers with its unique premise and charming characters.
At the heart of the novella is Ren, a cyclops who defies the typical monstrous stereotype. Ren is portrayed not as a fearsome creature, but as a relatable, nerdy character who struggles with self-esteem and the universal quest for love. His journey is one of self-discovery and acceptance, making him an endearing protagonist. Antoinette skillfully crafts Ren's character with depth and nuance, allowing readers to empathize with his insecurities and root for his happiness.
The narrative takes an intriguing turn when Ren inadvertently connects with his human camgirl crush. This unexpected interaction sets the stage for a whirlwind romance that is both spicy and heartwarming. The chemistry between Ren and the plus-size human female main character (FMC) is palpable, and their relationship unfolds with a delightful mix of humor and tenderness. Antoinette excels in creating a dynamic that feels authentic and engaging, drawing readers into their world.
One of the standout elements of Catching His Eye is its exploration of themes such as self-acceptance and the breaking of societal norms. Ren's journey is not just about finding love, but also about embracing his unique identity. The novella challenges conventional beauty standards and highlights the importance of seeing beyond appearances. This theme is further emphasized through the FMC, who is unaware of the existence of monsters, yet finds herself drawn to Ren's genuine personality.
The novella's fast-paced narrative is complemented by Antoinette's witty and engaging writing style. The dialogue is sharp and often humorous, adding a lighthearted touch to the story. The inclusion of a mischievous cat as an accidental matchmaker adds an element of whimsy, enhancing the novella's charm. This playful aspect of the story not only provides comic relief but also serves as a metaphor for the unpredictability of love.
In terms of character development, Antoinette does an admirable job of fleshing out her protagonists. Ren's evolution from a shy, self-doubting cyclops to a confident individual is portrayed with sensitivity and realism. The FMC, too, undergoes her own transformation, as she navigates her feelings and perceptions about the supernatural. Their growth is organic and believable, making their eventual union all the more satisfying.
While Catching His Eye is a novella, it manages to pack a punch in terms of emotional impact. The story's brevity does not detract from its depth, and Antoinette's ability to convey complex emotions in a concise format is commendable. The novella's fast burn romance is balanced by moments of introspection and vulnerability, creating a well-rounded narrative that resonates with readers.
Comparatively, Catching His Eye stands out in the monster romance genre for its unique premise and character-driven plot. Fans of authors like Talia Hibbert and Olivia Dade, who are known for their inclusive and heartwarming romances, will find much to appreciate in Antoinette's work. The novella's focus on self-love and acceptance is reminiscent of Hibbert's Get a Life, Chloe Brown, while its humor and charm echo Dade's Spoiler Alert.
Overall, Catching His Eye is a delightful and engaging read that offers a fresh perspective on romance and identity. Emily Antoinette has crafted a story that is both entertaining and thought-provoking, making it a must-read for fans of the genre. Whether you're a seasoned reader of monster romances or new to the world of Moonvale, this novella is sure to capture your heart.
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