Ace My Heart
by Layla Pine
“Dear God, pardon my French, but please don’t let me f*ck this up!”
Melanie Black is cursed – just ask her crazy superstitious mother.
Her tennis career is teetering on the brink of fabulousness, but she can’t seem to make it past a quarter-final. She’s also desperate to break her yearlong sex-drought; a problem because the only men she sees with any regularity are her hard-ar$e coach Steve, and his infuriating (but hot as Hell) son, Joel. Oh, and her best friend Brad, but he doesn’t really count.
But Mel’s luck is about to change, as she finally breaks her quarter-final curse, and gets an invite for sexy-times with tennis superstar and renowned playboy Pete Levine. Things seems to be looking up, until a sudden, horrific event turns everything upside down.
Desperate times call for desperate measures, and she and Joel decide to work together to try and deal with the fallout and pick up the pieces of Mel’s career, even as their teasing, antagonistic relationship begins to feel the strain of constant proximity…
…Mel’s tennis career may be getting back on track, but as other parts of their lives spin out of control, things between the two are bound to become explosive – one way or another.
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Martial Peak Reviews
Layla Pine’s Ace My Heart is a delightful blend of romance, sports drama, and personal growth that captures the reader’s attention from the very first page. The novel is a refreshing take on the classic romantic comedy, set against the backdrop of the high-stakes world of professional tennis. With its engaging characters and witty dialogue, Pine crafts a story that is both entertaining and emotionally resonant.
The protagonist, Melanie Black, is a character that many readers will find relatable. Her journey is not just about her professional aspirations but also about overcoming personal hurdles. Melanie’s struggle with her tennis career, where she is perpetually stuck at the quarter-final stage, serves as a metaphor for the various 'almosts' in her life. Her desperation to break her yearlong sex-drought adds a humorous yet poignant layer to her character, making her both endearing and real.
One of the novel’s strengths is its exploration of luck and superstition. Melanie’s belief in her curse, instilled by her superstitious mother, adds an intriguing dimension to her character. It raises questions about how much of our lives are governed by fate versus our own actions. This theme is cleverly woven throughout the narrative, providing depth to what could have been a straightforward romantic plot.
The supporting characters in Ace My Heart are equally well-developed. Joel, the son of Melanie’s coach, is a compelling counterpart to Melanie. Their relationship is marked by a teasing antagonism that gradually evolves into something deeper. Pine skillfully builds their chemistry, allowing it to simmer and develop naturally. Joel’s character is more than just a romantic interest; he is integral to Melanie’s journey, helping her navigate the tumultuous events that threaten to derail her career.
Melanie’s interactions with her coach, Steve, and her best friend, Brad, add further layers to the story. Steve’s hard-nosed approach to coaching contrasts with Melanie’s more emotional nature, creating tension and growth opportunities. Meanwhile, Brad provides comic relief and a grounding presence, reminding Melanie—and the reader—of the importance of friendship amidst chaos.
The novel takes a dramatic turn with a sudden, horrific event that upends Melanie’s life. This plot twist is handled with sensitivity and realism, showcasing Pine’s ability to tackle serious themes without losing the novel’s overall lighthearted tone. The event serves as a catalyst for Melanie and Joel to come together, forcing them to confront their feelings and the realities of their lives.
In terms of writing style, Pine excels in crafting dialogue that is both witty and authentic. The banter between Melanie and Joel is a highlight, capturing the essence of their complex relationship. Pine’s prose is engaging and accessible, making Ace My Heart a page-turner that is difficult to put down.
Comparatively, Ace My Heart shares thematic similarities with novels like The Hating Game by Sally Thorne, where the protagonists’ initial antagonism evolves into romance. However, Pine’s novel stands out due to its unique setting in the world of professional tennis, offering readers a glimpse into the challenges and triumphs of athletes. This sports backdrop adds an exciting dynamic to the romance, making it more than just a love story.
Overall, Ace My Heart is a compelling read that balances humor, romance, and drama with finesse. Layla Pine has crafted a story that is both entertaining and thought-provoking, with characters that linger in the reader’s mind long after the last page is turned. For those looking for a romantic comedy with depth and heart, Ace My Heart is a must-read.
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